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the foundations of life by ~sairah:iconsairah:





when we were where we are tomorrow
will yesterdays seem too far away?
the dreams we dreamt in our years to come
will follow us through our journeys;
these journeys
these trails, these paths
that lead us from our thens into our nows

these silences that scream with joyous forevers
these deafening whispers that breeze through the air.

when leaves will laugh at autumn winds
when flames will flicker in the still nights
i will be reborn
and will travel upon the roads of yesterdays and todays.

my destination is not tomorrow
my weariness is not spent
i will be appeased
by the hunger of my soul
the sometimes that come rarely will be now
the blue moon will burn brightly in the shadow of the pond

my yesterdays will come forward
and life will go on.
©2004-2009 ~sairah
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It reminds me of a quote someone had as their signature...something like "Remember yesterday, live today, dream about tomorrow."
I like the play of words and time with yesterdays, todays, and tomorrows.
love the way it ends - good one sairah

-sachin
i liked the greater part of it... somewhere between the end stanza and the first two i caught something about wanting to be a time traveler, and it threw me off, but overall, good poem, i really like it.

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like the way you associated the foundation of life..

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flowing, electric, and rich with marvelous imagery. nice work.

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spring...when the world is puddle-wonderful"
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gracias!!! :hug:

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