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Close your eyes
And think of Thoughts
That put a smile
On your face

Hold on to those thoughts
And let them take you
Away from here

Wander the hills and the secret paths
Of memories you cherish
Down valleys of laughter
Through meadows of joy

Take a ride on the carousel
Throw back your head and scream
As you ride the roller-coaster
With cotton candy kissing your lips

Curl up with a book or two
And lose yourself
In a romance you know
Will come true

Now sigh, and breathe
And open your eyes
Your smile is still there
You will make it through another day.
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:iconlitheba:
Mmm, I miss having the time to come on this site and see your works.

It sounds very nice said aloud (well, I said it aloud in my head) and just way I hear it makes me feel relaxed. Nice job.

~Lith

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"Passion is like crime: it does not thrive on the established order and the common round; it welcomes every blow dealt the bourgeois structure, every weakening of the social fabric, because therein it feels a sure hope of its own advantage." - Thomas Mann
:iconsairah:
i know what you mean. this is the first piece i've written in a LONG time.

thanks!

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If you don't read, you are stupid.
:iconcosmy:
aaah! Wish it was such easy to do.
Nice prose :) You still write so good and that's great! :D keep up!
:iconsairah:
thanks!! :hug:

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If you don't read, you are stupid.
:iconmea-culpa:
I don't know how I missed this peace before but I really like it. It seems to have a real sadness about it even though it is filled with quite lovely images. I love the last stanza and it reminds me of having a really nice dream and spending all day in a daze thinking the dream over and over. This is really well written and so easy to read, it flows nicely and has lots of lovely images, thanks for sharing :D

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Death is the only constant.
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Thank you!

It was written on a 'wistful' day....

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If you don't read, you are stupid.

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